Jinx Afeu' - Mare - Native

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[bg=teal] Click Character Name: Jinx Afeu' Pronounced: (jĭngks a fu) Gender: Mare Age: 3 yrs. old Appearance: Jinx Afeu' is a Rocky Mountain horse so her markings are unique. Her coat color is of a rich dark chocolate or black in color. Her mane and tail start off in a light black color and fade into a light flaxen or cream color. Jinx has a faint star marking on her forehead and when her feet are wet, a bit of a white coronet can be seen on all four feet. She had beautiful confirmation, especially when running. Stamina and endurance are there for Jinx but at times she has troubles holding onto it. She is a slower, steady paced runner who likes to take her time, so if she is up against speed and quickness she will never come close. Personality: Jinx is young and with young age comes the want and desire to explore lands and seek out almost any trouble she can get into. Sometimes she does not seek the trouble, trouble finds her and she just goes with it, trying for the best of the best. Through some of those times, Jinx has had the time to learn how to become quiet the little escape artist of sorts. She had also taught herself how to remain as silent as one can be when making an escape, so at times you have to watch her. Other than that, Jinx Afeu' is a kind and caring mare. She loves foals and loves to be by them; again, it can be good or bad, depending on the situation. There have been a few times that she has been asked to stay away from the young foals, because she gets too attached and treats them like her own. One of those times she even went as far as to attack the biological mother and mess with the little foals mind. Then again one time something happened to the biological mother and Jinx Afeu’ was able to step in and care for the little foal. She herself still acts like a foal and loves to play, though most of the times the one she chooses to play with do not wish to play. Jinx is often quiet and will follow through with an order, unsure she will ask. She is both a social gatherer as well as one who likes to be on her own, and left alone. She had no current love, she did at one time, but sadly he died. Her foals well they were taken from her and she currently holds no power in this so called world. A big fear of hers is being captured again, by humans and being left stranded. She sort of has to readjust herself to the wild setting again, because she was living so long in the human’s world. Rp Sample: Spring was a new way of life. The trees came out of their dormant state beginning to bud with new shoots, which would soon be leaves. The grass was no longer dead in yellows and browns; instead the new green shoots could be seen. The snow had just begun to melt, in some areas melted more than others. Rivers were beginning to break and roar with the raging winter waters. Floods happening were the lands were lower than most. Out from the forest of evergreens stepped a mare, dark chocolate, nearly black in color. Her ears were tipped toward one another as her nostrils flared. She was looking slightly shaggy with her winter coat, but you could also see the sleek, slender and muscular appearance and her spring/summer coat coming through. Ears flickered as she listened to her new surrounds and tail flickered as head and eyes scanned the horizon. Once she felt it was safe she stepped out even more and began to explore the lands. Jinx Afeu' picked up and easy going canter and covered some ground. Her confirmation was what that of a Rocky Mountain horse should be. She had an intelligent head with the long, graceful neck set into the muscular shoulders. Through the chest it is deep and wide, low withers, well-made quarters, strong tough legs and a well positioned back. All which came in handy when she ran, and right now Jinx Afeu' was showing it off. The stamina and endurance she had as well as the smooth gait like appearance. She stopped abruptly, head being thrown up as she snorted and pawed at the earth. Starring out towards the forest line, she was curious about the sound she heard. Her head went down as she walked forward, trying to be silent, wondering what the sound was from she heard. What she found was a small pack of wolf cubs. Realizing this she quickly turned around and bolted, not wanting to meet with the parents, she got out as quick as she could. After a few miles Jinx slowed herself down with a heavy related sigh, lowered her head to the new tender grass patch she found and began to eat. Other: Jinx Afeu' was born into a normal herd, but early in her life, something came up and she and her mother were rounded up and brought back to the stables. They were captured by the ones known humans. Jinx spent most of her time with them, and only returned to the wild about six months ago when the humans suddenly up and left their residence, leaving her behind.

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Declined.

I will not go over your application until you use the corret application format which is alined LEFT, not centered.

Also, your table is extremely bright and making it very hard for me to read. Please tone the bright lime green down a bit.

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Modified so that the text is aligned left and also modified my background color, to a teal. I hope this helps.

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Pending.

she is able to keep up with the most or keep her speed for a long distance, maybe slower then others, bust constant, she is not about spurts.


Very confusing, and where I assume a negative aspect of her appearance is. So please fix this sentence and if does not have a negative aspect of her appearance, then you need to include one, please. No perfect characters.

Again, I don't see much in the way of negatives when it comes to her personality. Please include some in their, possibly even fears.

Otherwise there are minor grammatical mistakes through out your application and sample post. I recommend putting your replies through MicroWord or something that has a Spell Check, as well as re-read your work before posting them; grammar mistakes can make a whole paragraph confusing.

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Post has been modified. I hope that makes it a bit clearer..

Sorry I am not always the greatest. I know what I am taking about or trying to explain, but sometimes when I have to put it to paper or text it gets the wrong idea.

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Accepted.

&& that's fine, it happens to everyone :] Thanks for your understanding.