Amazon-Mare-Native

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Character Name: :Amazon
Pronounced: Like the Forrest
Gender: Mare
Age: 3

Other Characters:None

Appearance: She stands at a tall 16.3HH, She has a Buck Skin coat with 2 front white socks, there is a scare on her left side from a fight she had with another filly when she was young. She is not to Quick on her feet but when she is needed to Gallop she will Gallop. She is a thick Build and is a heavy horse.


Personality:she has a mean but nice to the horses close to her, she is her own Horse, no one can break her, if any one gets in her way or that disagrees with her will get hurt. she can bite if she has to and u don't want her to she can be fierce at times but if she is calm, cool and relax she is a very nice Mare when you get to know her.



Rp Sample: It Just broke Morning over the Paddock the held 3 mares and their 4 Foals, one of the mares had have twins and one of them was not well.
There was Darkness over the Land because of that one foal, as those foals held power to stop the little Island from Dying out.
There was no one else that could help that poor foal except one who was the keeper of the horses.
The other horses trusted only that person
the keeper of the horses did know what to do but he needed help there was no one else the others would let near the foal.
"What will happen to my Baby Boy." the Mother neigh to the other Horses.
"We don't know but we will help you if you need it" the other horses told her.
as the day got older the foal was closer and closer to death, then as the Keeper noticed something that was not normal for a foal, the foal had a lump on his neck, it was taking all the blood from the foals body and it was building up fast.
The keeper then removes it and stitches it up and the foal gradually gets better
the other horses were running around happy as ever.
"Is he ok" the mother neighed to the other horses.

Other:Her whole Family has a dark Past as her Father was Killed by another stallion, Her mother was Killed by wild Wolves.
Mother: Kayla (deceased)
Father: Darcy (deceased)
Sister: Taylee and Laylee

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Please refer to the 'How to' Thread for the CORRECT forum code (copy and paste for natives)

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Modified is that ok now

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Pending.

Native horses are mustangs, and 16.3 is very tall for a mustang. Please change her height to at least 15.2 hands.

Please include her eye colour.

She is not to Quick on her feet but when she is needed to Gallop she will Gallop. She is a thick Build and is a heavy horse - those don't need to be capitalized.

she has a mean but nice to the horses close to her - I think you mean 'She is mean but nice to horses that are close to her'

Your personality has a lot of errors and something that resembles chat speak. ('u') and that is something that will not be tolerated on the site. Please read through everything in your application and fix the spelling errors, chat speak and comma splicing and sentence fragments.

I am also not sure about your rp sample at all. It is supposed to apply to the site, or at least be a fresh post and not a copied one. I get the impression that this one is from another site. It seems like you have some elemental factors in it, and I also don't really see your actual character being role-played; are you the foal or the mother? Or the other horses? I'm going to have to ask you to make a new role-play sample, please.

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You have until January 2oth to finish this application before the application is closed and your account deleted.

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